The simile that I found in this story is "as quiet as a mouse".
Canyon, I think that's a good one because our teachers say it.
I found: It smelled so good. Like peanuts only better.(page 64)
On page 24, the simile is "...sat trapped in a metal prison from which the only escape was to be thrown away like an old gum wrapper".
I like those comparisons, don't you? Does it paint a picture in your head?What do you see when someone says "quiet as a mouse" or "like an old gum wrapper"?Does the simile make you feel something?
I think of someone sneaking around at night, being very quiet.
I like the comparison. It makes me see garbage in a trash can. It makes me feel sad for Ralph.
I found "red as blood."
The simile I found was when the book wrote ''Ralph made himself as thin as a apple core."
The simile that I found in this story is "as quiet as a mouse".
ReplyDeleteCanyon, I think that's a good one because our teachers say it.
DeleteI found: It smelled so good. Like peanuts only better.(page 64)
DeleteOn page 24, the simile is "...sat trapped in a metal prison from which the only escape was to be thrown away like an old gum wrapper".
ReplyDeleteI like those comparisons, don't you?
ReplyDeleteDoes it paint a picture in your head?
What do you see when someone says "quiet as a mouse" or "like an old gum wrapper"?
Does the simile make you feel something?
I think of someone sneaking around at night, being very quiet.
DeleteI like the comparison. It makes me see garbage in a trash can. It makes me feel sad for Ralph.
ReplyDeleteI found "red as blood."
ReplyDeleteThe simile I found was when the book wrote ''Ralph made himself as thin as a apple core."
ReplyDelete